New Client Release: DAKOTA, book 5 of the Bad Boys of Dry River, Wyoming by Susan Fisher-Davis

DAKOTA Bad Boys of Dry River, Wyoming Book 5 by Susan Fisher-Davis  Available now! Amazon | Barnes & Noble | Kobobooks She broke his heart once but now she needs his help. Does he turn her away or risk his heart all over again… When he returned to Dry River to pursue his dream of … More New Client Release: DAKOTA, book 5 of the Bad Boys of Dry River, Wyoming by Susan Fisher-Davis

Revisions: Flow Killers – Filler Words and Repetition

Are you struggling with revisions, not understanding what needs expanding, and what needs cutting? Let’s start with filler and repetitive words. Some say you need to cut out filler words, adverbs, all passive voice, and cut down on descriptions…well…yes and no. It all depends on your voice, what your story line might dictate and frankly, it … More Revisions: Flow Killers – Filler Words and Repetition